Melodee Cord
Saturday, June 25, 2011
Ladies, what would you think?
Im sure she was just kidding. I would say the same thing, that doesnt mean that I would ever slap anyone.
Notice that the US government is starting to live up to the government that's portrayed in V for vendetta?
Has it really? Or is that just the impression you're under? Personally nothing has changed for me in the past 10 years aside from my Republican governor reducing the funding for schools.
Writers.. do you think I'm wasting my time?
it's good. i think your sentence flow and grammar needs to be improved, and the plot seems rushed. slow it down a bit and add more details.
I need a good username for ourWorld?
OK hey guys, I am on ouworld.com and I have 2 accounts Raven Lynn Stone and xXAlexTheWolfXx but we will be talking about xXAlexTheWolfXx I am a tom-boy I love wolves my fave colors red and blaack I am from Mecico but don't speak it cuz moved to USA when I was 3 so yea so I need a new username!
B&A, What do you think of my opening paragraph? And how do you think I could improve it ?
What a very great description! You could probably describe the woman a bit more. Also, can you see the last sentence, 'Then there was a loud...'. Take out the 'Then'. It builds a tiny bit more suspense, in my opinion. Also take out the 'then' in the sentence 'Then he heard her stop...'. Other than that the whole opening is very excellent. There was a lot of suspense, and I mean a lot of suspense. It really made me scared for real. I'm not jokin. Well done, man.
Help! My puppy chewed on a computer wire and was electrocuted!?
My brother found my puppy laying down next to a computer wire, unmoving. When he went around to move her, her mouth was stuck on the wire so he pulled the plug to free her. When the plug was pulled, she started shrieking in a sound we've never heard, and started running incredibly fast around the house before hiding in a small corner. For half an hour now, she's just stared at everything and is making a low growling, whimpering sound. What happened to her?
Pokemon Platinum Start Screen Creepy/Eerie?
Yeha i heard it too it WAS really creepy but then again Giratina is a Scary Pokemon who is amazingly strong
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